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All correspondences are forged by the Treat Typists Guild, Local 202, in the typewriter sweatshop hidden in the Semi-Auntomous Exclave of Belugastan. Forgeries are then delivered to unsuspecting rival nation-states in the nearby Metropolis. All documents are forged on the first take, typos included.
All letters are approved of by the Sovereign Republic of Belugastan's Typewriter Politburo and subsequently placed in the Outbox, to be delivered to neighboring states.
Queries from all parties may be directed to the Grand Vizier:
joel {{at}} laserscorpion [dot] com
Or to Commisar-General:
joel {{at}} laserscorpion [dot] com
Or to Commisar-General:
SamuelRaphael at Gmail dot Com
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Joel, you made me cry. And seriously. There's no great love without farewell, and the farewell of them are so close, just now when they understand even without words, precisely now when Buster is no longer paranoid about who is watching them, and rests his head on Tim's shoulder, just now when they love more to each other.
ReplyDeleteI have only one doubt: "Buster's warm body underneath him"? This means what I think it means?
More details, please, and thanks for another great chapter, don't stop, please.
How beautiful, how absolutely beautiful!! I can just feel Tim's heart skip a beat, then Tim's mind blanking out, as Buster keeps his eyes on him. I also can see Tim's brilliant smile, Buster whispering "Just looking' at you," and blasting his blue-eyed gaze at Tim in full force with Tim's ears turning bright red. Finally Buster resting his head on Tim's shoulder the entire ride was too much! And then the final several paragraphs, wow. Superb writing - you told us just enough for me to see them making love in the most wonderful way in their paradise of being together. To cool off I had to open the door and get a breeze (16 degrees F up here in Maine tonight.) I love this story and these two guys so much, my eyes well up just thinking of their happiness. Thank you for this chapter. I could end it here with no fights, no doubts or tears, but I'd love to hear a lot more about them getting it to last a little while longer, and a little while longer after that, and after that.
ReplyDeleteI went back and read from the beginning of Chapter 1 and it's amazing how many little delicious details I had forgotten (like Tim's phone sex foray) and so many more. Thank you again.
Jesse (love_baseball)